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i love your style (especially digital paintings) but at times i feel like the characters limbs are just a little stiff jointed or the poses aren't exactly right. just work on that (i admit, it is the hardest part of art), and it'll be perfect!! i really want to see your style of painting too (watercolours blah D:< needs more acrylics!!! blends nicer and looks cooler, and is a little easier to handle)
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Two new sketches. Very sketchy sketches that need work. Planning on using them in a piece when I get time though.
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I like the top one. Your anatomy has improved, though I think they still need work, especially on foreshortening/perspective/diff. views/or something.
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I'm a visual person, so I like redraws to help me with anatomy. If you don't like it, don't click; http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v5...0s/anatomy.jpg 1. It might be 'style', but distance from neck on both sides = width of head. 2. Your bodies are usually really long but I'll chuck it out to style for now. 3. Your elbow ends at hipbone/end of ribcage. Keep it up. Too lazy to do anymore. |
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Shit son, you're getting good at this drawing business!
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I really like that "Yield 65%" thing; she has a great body, but the arm just looks wrong. The upper arm tapers too much, the forearm looks like it has been whittled down, and the hand seems far too big. I like the overall style though, with the hair covering the face.
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I don't like the fact that the River of Souls piece has diff tones in the background yet she's flat. Lighting is all messed up too. But I guess you're rushed. Anyhoo moving on, I like the composition on the one taken with a camera.
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The coloring is better here, although I'm still annoyed at her crotch. It's like she's flat there or something. Don't blame it on tight pants cause those would only accentuate the line from thight to crotch to thigh.
Greater contrast in skin tone and more tones overall would've been nice. And uh... you could always just copy and paste the circles..... |
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Last edited by Ultima : Jan 13, 2007 at 02:36 AM.
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Don't rush your art, it makes it look bad.
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![]() Had a chance to work on it before I sent it out to Carnegie-Mellon. I have 3 hours to work before I have to send it out to Drexel, although I don't know if the big post office is open today... The new piece kind of rings more incomplete to me than the old piece did, but it does look better. I need to add more lighting/shading to Krue and blend the mountains better, and it will look much more complete. As soon as CS3 finishes reinstalling, this will happen. After almost 22 hours straight of drawing, I did get some sleep last night. A decent amount too. But it begins once again.... Additional Spam: ![]() Got bored. Look forward to more. ![]()
Last edited by Ultima : Jan 14, 2007 at 04:55 PM.
Reason: This member got a little too post happy.
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